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ORIGINAL T.F.O.Hinata chap15

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chapter 15-stage 2, and so much more


Naruto streaked through the trees, kage bunshin on either side of him, as he searched for traces of his teammate.


"Come on, Sakuraaaaaa,"

"I said NO, Anko!"

Naruto heard the voices and switched directions, headed in the direction of the sounds. That sounds like Sakura....and a woman!

"Come on Sakura,  I can make you hurt sooooooo good!"

"You know I'm not into that. Besides, I'm with Ino now, can't you just leave me alone for once? She'll return to the rendezvous point soon and if I'm not there, she'll be worried!"

Naruto landed silently on a tree about 25 feet from where the two were talking. Naruto could see Sakura, but all he could make of the other woman was a trenchcoat and a head of dark purple hair, since her back was to him.

"Fine. I'll leave now. Good luck finding another scroll, Sakura!" The other person jumped off, and Sakura crumpled slowly to the ground on her knees.

After a couple minutes, Naruto approached Sakura. The medic nin looked up at the sound of footsteps, and a slight blush tinted her cheeks when she saw it was her teammate.

"Naruto, what the hell do you want?" Sakura began to get a dangerous look in her eye as she realized that Naruto must have been listening in on her conversation.

"S-Sakura! I-I've got good news!" the blonde stuttered, quailing under the dangerous look given to him.

"It had better be important," she gorwled

"It is! It's about Sasuke! I..... I beat him!" Sakura's eyes went wide at the mention of Sasuke, and wider still when Naruto finished his statement

" You what?!" As Naruto began to explain his story, there appeared to be the hint of tears rising up in her eyes.


"Oh Naruto, I can't believe it! Is it really true?" At Naruto's toothy grin, Sakura nearly tackled Naruto over, giving him an uncharacteristically big hug

"S-Sakura!" Naruto choked out, "I-I can't breathe!" she loosened up slightly but didn't release him. After a moment, Naruto returned the hug, and they separated.

"So what now?" Sakura spoke finally, looking serious again. "Without our search of Sasuke, we have no reason to go look for akatsuki!"

"Yeah we do. All over, they're still hurting people, like they did to Gaara. We have to stop them, by any means necessary."

Sakura looked away. "Oh yeah. However, do you think we'll be enough?"

Naruto gave another grin. "If Kakashi-sensei and Yamato-taichou have taught me anyhitng, it's that we need to believe in teamwork! There are plenty of people who are willing to join us in our mission! Kakashi-sensei, Yamato, Hinata,Sai, Shikamaru, heck, even Ino would probably be willing to join us! I was thinking of asking Gaara to help too!"

"So that's Team 7's final mission?" Sakura asked, cracking a wry smile

"Yeah. Our final mission- Find and Destroy all remaining members of akatsuki, dattebayo!"

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After talking with Sakura, Naruto headed to the scene of the next stage. After arriving in the center of the forest without incident, Naruto rushed to the medical ops section, finding Hinata, a bandage wrapped around her head, but otherwise completely fine. They spent the remainder of the time until the 1st stage ended, merely lounging about together, or lightly training, making sure not to push Hinata too hard.

At last the time was up, and the final groups were brought together, once again, on the sparring field.

Tsunade stepped up to face them. "Well, congratulations on making it this far. You are among some of Konoha's most elite Shinobi. However, not all of you are yet qualified to become jounin. So, this next stage is the final stage. As with the chuunin exams, we will hold 1on 1 matches. The winner will become a jounin. The loser, well, there's always next year.

"Remember, there are no rules, the battle goes on until one person gives up or is knocked out. However, if there is a clear winner, I will call an end to the match."

High in the rafters, a wood panel slid over, revealing an enormous television screen. The names of all the candidates began to flash on it, finally stopping



                            UMINO IRUKA
                                          VS
                               UZUMAKI NARUTO




The two ninja gave a start. Naruto looked over at Iruka, grinning. Iruka returned the grin, looking quite a lot more worried than his former student did.


"You know the rules" Tsunade spoke, breaking the silence, "Everyone except the contestants move into the stands now.

Soon, only Naruto and Iruka stood, facing each other.

"Hey sensei!" Naruto called out. "Treat me to some ramen if I win!"

"Okay!" the scarred man replied, "But I won't go easy on you!"

Tsunade stepped off the field. "If the contestants are ready.......BEGIN!"

Naruto quickly took out some shuriken, throwing them to counter the ones already launched at him. HE ran forwards, pulling out a kunai. He jumped into the air to counter another volley of shuriken, then threw his kunai to counter one thrown at him.

As Naruto landed, he created a kage bunshin, and the two ran in tandem towards their opponent. As the clone moved in to punch, Iruka easily blocked, then sweeped low to kick the clonethen quickly catching his footing and jumping back to dodge the original.

"You're a lot better, Naruto!"

"Hee hee. Thanks, Iruka-sensei!" At this moment, Naruto pulled out several smoke bombs, creating a large cloud around he and his opponent.Iruka quickly jumped out of the smoke, only to have his foot caught in midair. His eyes widened in surprise, but he quickly bent down as he fell, planted his hands, then twisted and used his other foot to kick Naruto in the stomach. As his foot released, he fell back, quickly rolling and jumping back to his feet....just as he heard the "POOF" of a kage bunshin being disspelled.

Iruka grinned "Very smart, Naruto! Using the smokescreen to create a diversion to create some kage bunshin?" the smoke began to clear, and he could make out the silhouette of several figures.

However, his eyes widened when the smoke cleared further. An extremely feminine voice called out to him. "Oh, Iruka-sensei, Kakashi always said that a ninja must see underneath the underneath....looks like you failed to see this, eh?"

The smoke almost completely cleared, revealing that not only had Naruto created several kage bunshin, he had also done the oiroike no jutsu, meaning that Iruka was surrounded by several very beautiful, very naked, female versions of Naruto.

Iruka's jaw dropped, and a stream of blood began to drip out. However, rather than the intended gusher, it remained just that: a smal nosebleed.

"What? My pervy ninjutsu....you countered it! How??" Naruto exclaimed, releasing his henge.

Iruka wiped the blood away, smirking. "You forget that you taught that jutsu to one of my troublemaking students....Konohamaru used it so much that I'm almost completely immune to its effects!" His face grew serious. "No more fooling around, eh Naruto? Time to get serious."

"Yeah," Naruto agreed, Creating an army of kage bunshin.

"I think it's time i showed you my strength!" Iruka performed a few handsigns. "earth style! encampment wall jutsu!" An enormous wall made entirely out of rock surrounded the 2 in a 25 foot radius. He formed a few more handsigns "Water style! flooding destruction jutsu!" A huge jet of water cascaded out of the ninja's mouth, filling up the space he had created.

"Hey, Iruka-sensei, so you have a kekkai genkai too?"

Iruka looked at Naruto with a funny look. Both were now standing on top of the water. "What makes you think that?"

"Well, Kakashi-sensei and Yamato-taichou said that if you have a kekkai genkai, you have 2 nature affinities!"

Iruka grinned "well, Naruto-kun, I'm surprised that you know about nature manipulation! But to be frank, no, i don't have a kekkai genkai. My element is water.....but just becasue you have one affinity doesnt mean you can't use others with practice!"

"Oooooh!" Naruto grinned. "Thanks for the lesson, Iruka-sensei, dattebayo!" he created a clone. "Well, if you're going to get serious, I guess i had better, too!" He tossed 2 kunai at Iruka, Which he countered with one of his own. It wasn't until they were spinning in the air did he notice the explosive tage attached to them.

"Oh crap" Quickly, he did some hand signs. The tage on the kunai exploded just as Iruka raised a wall of water to shield himself. The force of the explosion still knocked him back, however, and he used his chakra to stop himself from smashing into his rock wall.He looked up and saw Naruto standing right in front of him, then sliding low for a sweeping kick. Iruka dodged, and preformed some hand signs.

"Water style! Water Prison jutsu!" Naruto saw the water rise up to surround him, and he moved to jump out of the way, but it was too late. A part of the water grabbed his leg, coming up to surround him, enveloping him in a sphere of water.

"Heh, looks like it's over, Naruto!" Iruka grinned. A voice suddenly spoke behind him

"Yup, it is." A kunai raised up to Iruka's neck, while one of his arms was held behind his back.

"A ninja must see underneath the underneath, Iruka sensei! While you were reeling from the explosive tage, i created a shadow clone and hid underwater. While this happened, I had the clone distract you long enough to plant this tag on you." He slid Iruka's hand down to his side, where he found a slip of paper stuck to his vest. Then I used the fourth's old jutsu to teleport behind you, and here we are."

"Smart move, Naruto!" The kage bunshin in the sphere of water finally dissipated with a poof, as Tsunade jumped up onto the water's surface.

"The match is over. For defeating Iruka , Naruto has now qualified to be our first new jounin!"

As Naruto released his former sensei, Iruka smiled. "Congratulations, Naruto"

"Thanks, Iruka-sensei. But more importantly, Ichiraku's, here I come!"

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well, you asked for the original....unanimously, i might add, so here it is.....CHAPTER 15. i tried to make this longer, so plz tell me what you think ^^

well, Naruto is a jounin now....and about time too, since he's as strong or strongger than the rest of the jonin in the series >/_\>

remember, i don't want to hear flames. constructive criticism is fine, but i will hide flames. i have journalistic freedom, and you have no right to say that such and such a thing won't happen. It's not your place to decide

However, please give me CONSTRUCTIVE criticism? How well did this fight work?my original story was a bit different, but this one makes more sense, which is how all of my chapters have been.

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omg that was so cool but when is chapter 16 gonna come out i wanna read it plz make it if you can thnx and your writing is fantastic it includes allot of detail